Vlevo
f8c0237768
I keep shooting 'cause I keep missing introduction.md
2023-01-25 22:07:03 -05:00
Vlevo
864e7082eb
grammar README.md
2023-01-25 21:22:10 -05:00
Vlevo
d5199e834e
tweaks
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5 a group of crows is a murder. I understand "not trusting" 'the entire local union' of crows bit, but if you're not going to like them then, well, they will be murder. ;-D
& others
2023-01-18 20:28:16 -05:00
Vlevo
6c806d6dd2
tweaks
2023-01-18 19:22:50 -05:00
Vlevo
d04f5ed0e5
tweaks
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Vlevo
11a1aea296
tweaks
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Vlevo
d997fe7db0
tweaks
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Vlevo
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tweaks
2023-01-18 18:30:10 -05:00
Vlevo
07f8271475
tweak grammar
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Vlevo
40ecaceacd
grammar tweaks
2023-01-18 18:01:15 -05:00
Vlevo
6ceca4cf30
grammar tweaks
2023-01-18 17:44:38 -05:00
Brett Chalupa
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Merge pull request #13 from Vlevo/patch-2
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Tweaks: grammar 08-sound.md
2023-01-18 16:03:13 -05:00
Brett Chalupa
76da9eda39
Merge pull request #12 from Vlevo/patch-1
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Tweaks: grammar
2023-01-18 16:02:38 -05:00
Vlevo
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Tweaks: grammar 08-sound.md
2023-01-18 15:54:30 -05:00
Vlevo
25efeba953
typo/grammar stuff
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High score doesn't need a hyphen and usually doesn't receive one. (14 times, it looks sus to me. One or two, sure. I did leave the title one 'cause that one looks good.)
2023-01-18 15:36:24 -05:00
Brett Chalupa
4e43561a69
fix(outro): typo
2023-01-14 06:54:48 -05:00
Brett Chalupa
c96e9b7508
chore: gimp & inkscape dev tools
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thanks to akz!
2023-01-08 13:18:47 -05:00
Brett Chalupa
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chore: document release steps
2023-01-08 12:59:53 -05:00
Brett Chalupa
0fc27fd495
chore: document that DRGTK 4.0 works
2023-01-08 12:38:39 -05:00
Brett Chalupa
98cd6d738a
chore: mention DragonRiders recipes in outro
2023-01-08 11:48:50 -05:00
Brett Chalupa
c3941fd795
chore: add testimonials to intro
2023-01-08 11:46:47 -05:00
Brett Chalupa
2932bd8b99
feat: expand Game Dev Resources
2023-01-08 11:43:32 -05:00
Brett Chalupa
8eb80e9398
fix: introduction of #method shorthand
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Fixes https://github.com/DragonRidersUnite/book/issues/8
thanks to @Vlevo!
2023-01-08 11:32:42 -05:00
Brett Chalupa
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Merge pull request #11 from Vlevo/Vlevo-5
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tweaks for chaps 4-6
2023-01-08 11:27:19 -05:00
Brett Chalupa
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Merge pull request #9 from Vlevo/main
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grammatical tweaks chaps 1-3
2023-01-08 11:25:07 -05:00
Brett Chalupa
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fix(ch03): awkward array phrasing
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fixes https://github.com/DragonRidersUnite/book/issues/10
thanks to @Vlevo for the feedback and suggestions
2023-01-08 11:23:51 -05:00
Brett Chalupa
ba7b77ca9f
fix: alpha max val
2023-01-08 11:19:40 -05:00
Brett Chalupa
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chore: add newsletter links
2022-12-22 05:22:24 -05:00
Vlevo
10d10842df
Update 06-time-attack.md
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43 we have the time remaining, but to get the time remaining, we divide it (the time remaining) by 60...
45 let's us --> let us us
2022-12-19 00:25:09 -05:00
Vlevo
f4ab1b79cb
grammar tweaks 04-target-practice.md
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23 list part "agreement": a's for b, c's for d, e "for" f.
59 "at the same point" or "in the same space"
114 originally I made this "what used to be exciting seems" and then realized that I was miss-chunking/interpreting it, because "games" -> "it" made the "it" seem so wrong.
137 "between 0 and 100", "from 0 up to 100". 'between' sounds more like "0 < number < 100". and you want "0 <= number < 100".
2022-12-18 23:31:14 -05:00
Vlevo
3d596b1005
Update 05-fireball-clean-up.md
2022-12-18 23:21:19 -05:00
Vlevo
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typo/grammar stuff 03-spit-fire.md
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41 "can you begin to imagine ..." is a question.
88 The list contains no 'and', but feels more like it should "remain open-ended" (", etc.") than to acquire the written-in-stone feeling that ", and player inventory." would give it. ("Games are composed of huge collections of" only these four things!)
90 This list is a finite one, as it is an example list of "some ways" to do something and so wants for lack of an ", and ".
120 "(oftentimes hashes)" or "(often hashes)"
2022-12-16 18:44:18 -05:00
Vlevo
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consistancy 01-hello-dragon.md
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127 make x & y coords/position consistent with the other "array" uses of `x` & `y` (or remove? from 136, 168, and 172)
2022-12-16 14:59:30 -05:00
Vlevo
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typos 02-player-movement.md
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15: 'tick' here is "a concept of time" and not a variable/method/filename/etc.
2022-12-16 14:40:10 -05:00
Brett Chalupa
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chore: thank vlevo
2022-12-15 16:30:38 -05:00
Brett Chalupa
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Merge pull request #7 from Vlevo/Vlevo-patch-2
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various grammatical tweaks to 01-hello-dragon.md
2022-12-15 16:29:31 -05:00
Brett Chalupa
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Merge branch 'main' into Vlevo-patch-2
2022-12-15 16:28:53 -05:00
Brett Chalupa
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fix(ch01): Velvo edits edits
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just making some changes based on what I'd prefer from those edits
2022-12-15 16:27:09 -05:00
Vlevo
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various grammatical tweaks to 01-hello-dragon.md
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explanation worthy mentions:
Itch.io always calls itself 'itch.io' and so, at least in print, should we.
Apple spells it macOS, even at the beginning of sentences.
2022-12-13 21:21:56 -05:00
Brett Chalupa
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Merge pull request #5 from Vlevo/patch-1
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typos
2022-12-13 19:55:38 -05:00
Brett Chalupa
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Merge pull request #6 from kaylakantola/patch-1
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hello dragon typo fixes
2022-12-13 19:53:58 -05:00
Kayla Kantola
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hello dragon typo fixes
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Thank you for writing this book ❤️ Really enjoying it so far. Caught a few typos!
2022-12-13 19:18:58 -05:00
Vlevo
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typo
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"shoots" instead of "shots"
2022-12-13 17:24:36 -05:00
Brett Chalupa
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Merge pull request #4 from Vlevo/Vlevo-patch-1
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Small grammar-esc change
2022-12-13 16:37:16 -05:00
Vlevo
429c600261
Small grammar-esc change
2022-12-13 16:23:16 -05:00
Brett Chalupa
3f2529187d
chore: remove readme disclaimer
2022-12-13 12:33:01 -05:00
Brett Chalupa
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fix(intro): weird clarity with sentence
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h/t Vlevo
2022-12-13 12:20:34 -05:00
Brett Chalupa
9ee3b09abc
feat: link to itch page to download
2022-12-13 07:05:09 -05:00
Brett Chalupa
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chore: simplify header features
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so title is less truncated on mobile; print and editing icons aren't
very important in the context of this book
2022-12-12 18:16:41 -05:00
Brett Chalupa
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feat: remove intro warning
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