From f192dfb1769e5fc1fb22fc56746cf7ac5ffccc44 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: AW Green <awg@posteo.us>
Date: Sun, 13 Aug 2017 10:22:35 +0700
Subject: [PATCH] system/tarsnap: Script cleanup.

Signed-off-by: Willy Sudiarto Raharjo <willysr@slackbuilds.org>
---
 system/tarsnap/README             | 12 +++++++++---
 system/tarsnap/slack-desc         |  4 ++--
 system/tarsnap/tarsnap.SlackBuild | 12 ++++++------
 3 files changed, 17 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-)

diff --git a/system/tarsnap/README b/system/tarsnap/README
index 0d998b61a7..fa842367a0 100644
--- a/system/tarsnap/README
+++ b/system/tarsnap/README
@@ -1,5 +1,11 @@
 Tarsnap is a secure cloud-based backup service featuring client-side
-encryption and deduplication created by Colin Percival.
+encryption and de-duplication created by Colin Percival.  You will need
+to be a Tarsnap subscriber to use this software.
 
-This is only the client software.  You will need to be a tarsnap
-subscriber to use the service.
+The recommended cache directory for Slackware is /var/cache/tarsnap, but
+this can be changed in /etc/tarsnap.conf to suit your file scheme.
+
+Even casual backups may contain sensitive data!  Before running the
+build, please take a moment to verify the source tarball.  The Tarsnap
+website has instructions for checking your copy against the release hash
+and Tarsnap code signing key.
diff --git a/system/tarsnap/slack-desc b/system/tarsnap/slack-desc
index 3d20f482d7..af8d25366f 100644
--- a/system/tarsnap/slack-desc
+++ b/system/tarsnap/slack-desc
@@ -6,10 +6,10 @@
 # customary to leave one space after the ':' except on otherwise blank lines.
 
        |-----handy-ruler------------------------------------------------------|
-tarsnap: tarsnap (Client software for Tarsnap backup service)
+tarsnap: tarsnap (Client software for Tarsnap)
 tarsnap:
 tarsnap: Tarsnap is a secure cloud-based backup service featuring client-side
-tarsnap: encryption and deduplication created by Colin Percival.
+tarsnap: encryption and de-duplication created by Colin Percival.
 tarsnap:
 tarsnap: https://www.tarsnap.com
 tarsnap:
diff --git a/system/tarsnap/tarsnap.SlackBuild b/system/tarsnap/tarsnap.SlackBuild
index 9dfae49766..4c78c0ac48 100644
--- a/system/tarsnap/tarsnap.SlackBuild
+++ b/system/tarsnap/tarsnap.SlackBuild
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 #!/bin/sh
 
-# SlackBuild for Tarsnap, 9 August 2017
+# SlackBuild for Tarsnap, 12 August 2017
 # AW Green <awg@posteo.us>
 # All rights reserved.
 #
@@ -17,8 +17,8 @@
 # TORTIOUS ACTION, ARISING OUT OF OR IN CONNECTION WITH THE USE OR
 # PERFORMANCE OF THIS SOFTWARE.
 
-## The Tarsnap client itself remains a copyrighted work.  Please see the
-## file COPYING in the Tarsnap client source distribution.
+## The Tarsnap client itself remains a copyrighted work.
+## Please see the file COPYING in the Tarsnap source distribution.
 
 PRGNAM=tarsnap
 VERSION=${VERSION:-1.0.39}
@@ -38,8 +38,8 @@ TMP=${TMP:-/tmp/SBo}
 PKG=$TMP/package-$PRGNAM
 OUTPUT=${OUTPUT:-/tmp}
 
-# we can omit the usual block here for passing ARCH-specific flags,
-# since tarsnap's configure script handles this on its own.
+# we can omit the usual block here for passing ARCH-specific flags
+# since tarsnap's configure handles this on its own.
 
 set -e
 
@@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ find -L . \
  \( -perm 666 -o -perm 664 -o -perm 640 -o -perm 600 -o -perm 444 \
   -o -perm 440 -o -perm 400 \) -exec chmod 644 {} \;
 
-# patch stock path in tarsnap.conf.sample.
+# change stock path in tarsnap.conf.sample.
 patch -p1 < $CWD/$PRGNAM.patch
 
 ./configure \